Whoosh, pop, boom. This was mostly just a test to see if I could actually do flowy-like comics. Tell me what y'all think!
This idea has been stuck in my head since I saw Mottenfest's 'Where Rainbows Come From' piccie. Just haaaad to do it... Hehee. Hope zir Rensis likes it and doesn't think me a louse-infested retard...
Anyways, so I need crits so I can improve my storyboarding, so fire away!
ahahahahaaa! i love the expressions!
now i'll try to give you my not so expert advice for teh comic makin!
As far as flow is concerned I wouldn't suggest the hug black space in the middle of the comic, it defiantely confused me for a sec. XD The frames work well together I understood what was going on okay, but i recommend making the file larger so they can be seen better.
So you can get a feel for who you're taking advice from here's my comic folder on VCL [link]
Hope I helped a little at least and thanks for the comic I have much luuuuv!
-- Homophobia: The irrational fear that gays will invade and rearrange your furniture against your will.
Aye... Space was a relative mistake that I didn't quite bother ta fix... Mayhap I should try an' go back to fix it... Grr, if I hadnt deleted the original frames...
Thankies fer tha helps... Don't get much chance to draw comics not on paper, so my compy-type ones are kinda iffy at best... Need work 'fore I can get started on 'Divide'... Glad ya liked it, though!
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now i'll try to give you my not so expert advice for teh comic makin!
As far as flow is concerned I wouldn't suggest the hug black space in the middle of the comic, it defiantely confused me for a sec. XD The frames work well together I understood what was going on okay, but i recommend making the file larger so they can be seen better.
So you can get a feel for who you're taking advice from here's my comic folder on VCL [link]
Hope I helped a little at least and thanks for the comic I have much luuuuv!
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Homophobia: The irrational fear that gays will invade and rearrange your furniture against your will.
Thankies fer tha helps... Don't get much chance to draw comics not on paper, so my compy-type ones are kinda iffy at best... Need work 'fore I can get started on 'Divide'... Glad ya liked it, though!
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Fuxing up your head since 1987.
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Homophobia: The irrational fear that gays will invade and rearrange your furniture against your will.
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Fuxing up your head since 1987.
Awesome, awesome.
Critique-wise, I agree with Rensis.
Love ya!
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