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©2007-2009 ~Corvidraline
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Whoosh, pop, boom. This was mostly just a test to see if I could actually do flowy-like comics. Tell me what y'all think!

This idea has been stuck in my head since I saw Mottenfest's 'Where Rainbows Come From' piccie. Just haaaad to do it... Hehee. Hope zir Rensis likes it and doesn't think me a louse-infested retard...

Anyways, so I need crits so I can improve my storyboarding, so fire away!

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:iconmottenfest:
ahahahahaaa! i love the expressions!
now i'll try to give you my not so expert advice for teh comic makin!
As far as flow is concerned I wouldn't suggest the hug black space in the middle of the comic, it defiantely confused me for a sec. XD The frames work well together I understood what was going on okay, but i recommend making the file larger so they can be seen better.
So you can get a feel for who you're taking advice from here's my comic folder on VCL [link]

Hope I helped a little at least and thanks for the comic I have much luuuuv! :D

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Homophobia: The irrational fear that gays will invade and rearrange your furniture against your will.
:iconcorvidraline:
Aye... Space was a relative mistake that I didn't quite bother ta fix... Mayhap I should try an' go back to fix it... Grr, if I hadnt deleted the original frames...

Thankies fer tha helps... Don't get much chance to draw comics not on paper, so my compy-type ones are kinda iffy at best... Need work 'fore I can get started on 'Divide'... Glad ya liked it, though!

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Fuxing up your head since 1987.
:iconmottenfest:
I know the feeling of deleting the original files having to start again, ees pure annoying. D:

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Homophobia: The irrational fear that gays will invade and rearrange your furniture against your will.
:iconcorvidraline:
*Noddles*

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Fuxing up your head since 1987.
:iconhyjahk:
Fuckin funny as hell baby!
Awesome, awesome.

Critique-wise, I agree with Rensis.
Love ya!

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The Blood of Some is Sweeter Than the Blood of Others.

A cynic is a man who, when he smells flowers, looks around for the coffin.

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